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Shelter in Shadows

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I hide in these shadows
The sun burns and blinds
Set this disfigurement in flames
till only ashes remain
The earth reclaims itself from me
My newest poem. Picture from Google Images.
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Wonderfully constructed. The piece keeps a nice rhythm and avoids cliches. I particularly like the third line. It present a clear image of the emotion. The rest of the piece seems to flow around that line, feeding off that one image. I enjoyed it a lot. :)